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Example 4 - Confused English
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Memo to Production Manager

  • It is vitally important that our inward flow of raw material is maintained at its current level.
  • This requirement is fundamental to our efficiency. If it implies that we must resort to duplicating our suppliers then this is absolutely essential and must be implemented without delay.
  • If our existing suppliers object to this proposal we must be diplomatic, but this supply security is a fundamental element of the current supply re-structuring plans and must be adhered to.

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